"TRUE LOVE"

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"TRUE LOVE"

Postby Don » Tue Jan 11, 2011 3:17 pm

TRUE LOVE ©


He left her at daybreak
without speaking a word,
Just slipped away softly
so she never heard.

He took very little
for his needs were not great,
Not wanting to wake her
since she got in late.

He let the old truck
roll way down the hill,
Only then did he start it
for the motor was shrill.

Once out on the highway
he drove with such speed,
His thoughts were of pleasure
and of filling his need.

He saw her at last
parked down by the lake,
The beauty of her
made his hands start to shake.

Now finally it’s over
no more dreaming or wishing,
He just jumped in his boat
and set out to go fishing.



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Re: "TRUE LOVE"

Postby Hope » Tue Jan 11, 2011 8:32 pm

Don,
This is so good and I Loved the ending you sure had me fooled for a moment. A Man and his toys LOL! I really enjoyed this.


God Bless You Eva
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Re: "TRUE LOVE"

Postby Brenda Pike » Wed Jan 12, 2011 12:43 pm

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OH, THIS ONE WAS A SLICK ONE DON. TOO COOL. FISHING!!!! HA! HA! SINCERELY, BRENDA
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Re: "TRUE LOVE"

Postby Shirley Shaw » Sun Jan 23, 2011 3:29 pm

DEAR DON;
YOU HAD ME FOOLED TOO..LOL...AT FIRST, I THOUGHT THIS WAS A VERY SAD POEM, AND HOPED THAT IT WASN'T YOUR LIFE CASE SCENARIO, BUT," IT CAUGHT ME@THE END" ! STILL, A VERY LOVELY WRITE,PRETTY WORDS ! GREAT WRITE.."GOD BLESS YOU"..WITH LOVE, SHIRLEY ANN SHAW~~~~
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