The Acropolis

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The Acropolis

Postby Richard2 » Sat May 12, 2012 8:34 pm

I wrote this when I was nineteen to someone i will never forget

The Acropolis
(a wish of a dream)

She reigns, red pale mimic
of the sun;
The sea siege citadel
of her flowing hair
entwines, envisions
her shadow on sea blue eyes

I saw her laughter
across a gulf
of tactile nothingness
Ebb tide, the wind.
The face of time's
telepathic pathway

The sea infolds, entraps
that red mimic
daughter of the sun
then loves the tide
releases it

I caught her
(Life by the sea)
And touched her face
The cold seawind between
Our eyes knew
What could not be said
Last edited by Richard2 on Mon May 14, 2012 5:34 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: The Acropolis

Postby Pokey's Heart » Sun May 13, 2012 10:33 am

Awesome,
Richard, with many layers!
"I can do all things, through Christ, who strengthens me" Phillipians 4:13
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