END OF A DANCE

[Brenda Pike]

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END OF A DANCE

At first glance,
he took my breath away.
Embracing life's dance—
gently we swayed.

Gliding in harmony,
across the ballroom floor,
He whispered,
"I've never loved like this before.

Swaying passionately
to the top of the mountain—
like sweet nectar,
and wine from youth’s fountain.

I’d waited a lifetime
for his sweet love—
our hearts beat in sync
like two turtle doves.

My love never ceased—
in time you changed,
losing direction,
our souls were estranged.

What could have been
never will be—
your image comes to mind,
and sadness engulfs me.



Brenda Clark Pike
©2012

[Hope]

Brenda,
This is one Awesome love poem! I love how you wrote this Love is a dance at times that sometimes ends.
God Bless You Love Eva

[Brenda Pike]

THANK YOU DEAR EVA FOR YOUR COMMENT. YES, THIS IS A TRUE STORY THAT TOOK PLACE ONCE IN MY LIFE. SO SAD. SOME THINGS IN LIFE WE HAVE NO CONTROL OVER NO MATTER WHAT WE DO. EVEN NOW I LOOK AT THE SITUATION AND SEE NO WAY I COULD HAVE SAVED OUR MARRIAGE NOR HIM. GOD BLESS YOU. LOVE BRENDA

[Pokey's Heart]

Awww, Brenda, it always brings my heart such joy when I read your poems, and you never fail to delight the senses with your many layered works, my friend. Awesome poem!

[Brenda Pike]

POKEY, GLAD YOU ENJOYED THE POEM THE END OF THE DANCE. THANK YOU FOR THE COMMENT OF THE LAYER OF WORKS OF MY POETRY. MOST OF MY LIFE IS IN LAYERS. GOD BLESS YOU.
LOVE BRENDA

[snoochie]

Lovely poem, Brenda. After all the twirling on the floor, sometimes one can no longer lead and the other can no longer follow because the tune has changed.

[Brenda Pike]

HELLO KAREN, YES YOU'RE SO CORRECT GIRL. THE TUNE DID CHANGE AND I COULDN'T AND WOULDN'T FOLLOW HIS LEAD TO DESTRUCTION. I TRIED TO HELP HIM AND GUIDE HIM BUT NO HE WANTED TO DANCE TO THE WRONG TUNE. THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENT. MANY BLESSING GIRL. LOVE BRENDA

[Happy Holmes1]

O how sad, but true Brenda. You wished every story could be a "Happy Ever After;" but realistically, it can't always be that way. So glad, even though you have a happy ending without him, nevertheless, you have a happy ending. Thank You Lord!!!

-Dawn

[Brenda Pike]

DEAR DAWN, THANKS FOR STOPPING IN TO READ MY POEM. YES, I HAD HOPED THIS DANCE WOULD NEVER END. STRANGE THINGS HAPPEN IN LIFE AND THIS WAS SURE ONE OF THEM. AND YES I'M HAPPY NOW AGAIN WITH DEAR LOVING PHILLIP. GOD BLESS YOU. LOVE BRENDA

[DeaconSteve]

Well, I'm sorry about the final outcome Brenda, but I still love this poem, very well written and very poetic. You did excellent on this one. Hugs and blessings.

[Brenda Pike]

THANKS STEVE FOR YOUR COMMENTS, I REALLY APPRECIATE YOUR KIND WORDS OF ENCOURAGEMNET. GOD BLESS YOU, LOVE BRENDA

[B.J.Morbitzer]

Dear Brenda,
All I can say is simply just beautiful my friend.
Such beauty in this awesome write dear friend.
I hope that this goes to power point it should in my thinking.
Another amazing write Brenda.
I pray you are feeling better to my friend.
God Bless Ya
B.J.Morbitzer<><

[DeaconSteve]

Well, this poem didn't make to a Power Point as B.J. suggested, but I did this with us, and this is the first time have posted on ecard on Nethugs for someone. Hope you don't mind Skip. God bless and Enjoy Brenda.

http://www.openmyeyeslord.net/endofdancebrendap.htm

[Brenda Pike]

THANK YOU B.J. FOR YOUR KIND COMMENTS. I APPRECIATE YOUR KIND WORDS AND HAPPY YOU ENJOYED MY POEM. GOD BLESS YOUR SWEET HEART. LOVE BRENDA

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[Brenda Pike]

STEVE, THANK YOU SO MUCH I LOVE THE ECARD. WHAT A LOVELY THING TO DO. THANK YOU, THANK YOU, I REALLY APPRECIATE YOUR EFFORT AND KINDNESS. GOD BLESS YOU ALWAYS. LOVE BRENDA