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Postby Wandas on Thu Aug 16, 2007 10:30 pm

Like a Dream

Like a dream
We were standing together face to face
Like a dream
You were holding me close and my heart began to race
Like a dream
Our eyes met and the world seemed to disappear
Like a dream
We began to dance to music only we could hear
Like a dream
You brushed my cheek and trace my lips tenderly
Like a dream
Our lips met and we kissed passionately
Like a dream
I was with you and I didn't have a care
Like a dream
We shared something only you and I could share


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Postby golda164 on Mon Aug 20, 2007 5:27 pm

Enjoyed reading this poem of yours, dear Wandas.

Beautifully presented. Bravo, my friend. Please keep 'em coming :lol:

Remain blessed.

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Postby shmrck1019 on Mon Aug 20, 2007 7:08 pm

Simply lovely. I enjoyed reading this one so much. :)
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Postby Wandas on Mon Aug 20, 2007 10:47 pm

Thank you Golda164. I appreciate your kind words. I haven't written much lately because I just recently started attending school again after 12 years. I have been a little busy getting back in the routine of studying. I'll try to post again soon.
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Postby Wandas on Mon Aug 20, 2007 10:49 pm

shmrck1019, thank you very much for response!
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Postby Marlys on Mon Aug 20, 2007 11:21 pm

This is very romantic..I like it a lot!
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Postby Wandas on Tue Aug 21, 2007 7:01 pm

Thank you Marlys. I am a hopeless romantic when it comes to love and I wrote this a few years ago after my divorce. I didn't think I would ever feel this way again for anyone. Fortunately, I began seeing a special person who showed me what love really is and I thank God for sending him my way!
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Postby Kennysr61 on Tue Aug 21, 2007 10:31 pm

The feelings you have shared here are beautiful. You are so right, it is like a dream when you feel that special connection. May they endure all time.
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Postby Wandas on Wed Aug 22, 2007 6:38 am

Thank you Kenny!
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Re: Love

Postby Doug Holt on Wed Aug 22, 2007 7:07 am

Wandas wrote:Like a Dream

Like a dream
We were standing together face to face
Like a dream
You were holding me close and my heart began to race
Like a dream
Our eyes met and the world seemed to disappear
Like a dream
We began to dance to music only we could hear
Like a dream
You brushed my cheek and trace my lips tenderly
Like a dream
Our lips met and we kissed passionately
Like a dream
I was with you and I didn't have a care
Like a dream
We shared something only you and I could share


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Wonderful Words Of love

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Postby Wandas on Wed Aug 22, 2007 12:13 pm

Thank you Doug!
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Postby Shakela on Fri Aug 24, 2007 4:15 am

Dear Wanda,

Your poem was such a dream itself. I enjoyed reading it immensely. Thanks for sharing. God bless you and those you love.

Love always,
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Postby Wandas on Fri Aug 24, 2007 6:28 am

Shakela, thank you for those words and the same to you!
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Postby webmaster on Tue Sep 04, 2007 8:04 am

I love it! It's and e-card:

http://www.nethugs.com/likeadream.shtml

Thank you for this sweet one Wandas. I am sure it will melt hearts all over the world. Thank you Doug for the nomination.
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Postby LadyMustang on Tue Sep 04, 2007 8:06 am

congradulation on the E-Card so well deserved this is very beautiful and the webmaster did a beautiful job on the E-card totally AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!

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