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Postby ARPoet » Mon Apr 20, 2009 12:32 pm

I saw this photo on a friends photo site and knew i had to write this very sad poem.

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Gone
By
Roger Turner

Now it is that time of day,
When they would come strolling this way.
Always they’d pause, then take a seat,
Hoping that their friends they’d meet.

Most fine days they’d stop their walk,
Enjoying all their manly talk.
Football, racing, gardening too,
And all the things men like to do.

Then one day there were only three,
Who came for their chat while sitting on me.
They spoke about their departed friend,
Saying it was quick, right at the end.

After a while, three became two.
Their sadness clearly there in view.
It won’t be long, I heard one say,
Maybe tomorrow, or even today.

The two of them, still came to chat,
Talking about both this and that.
But alas, one said he felt ill,
He would have to go and take a pill.

The next day only one stopped bye,
And just looked up to the clear blue sky.
At least you are now totally pain free.
I’ll miss you friend, now there’s only me.

He never came to sit again,
Leaving me alone in wind and rain.
I wonder if he too has gone,
Back to mother earth, were we all came from.
Dont rush to do today what you can leave until tomorrow... tomorrow you may do it much better...
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Re: Gone

Postby Janice Kennedy » Mon Apr 20, 2009 1:19 pm

Ah! Roger it is sad. It is life, and you write about it in such a profound way, my friend. Glad to see you posting again.


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Re: Gone

Postby Linner » Mon Apr 20, 2009 1:29 pm

Yes, sad.....but extremely beautiful, too, Roger. You did a marvelous job on this one...bravo!!...and touched my heart with this poignant write !! That time shall come for us all....just make sure your bag is 'packed'...like your parachute !!!

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Re: Gone

Postby Doug Holt » Mon Apr 20, 2009 2:05 pm

Roger, Sad But so true

Excelant write from the heart Read it a few times.

so much food for thought.

Masterpiece. Kudos.

We are all Born To Die,

I try now to live each day as my last.

God Bless you.

Thanks for sharing Doug.
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Re: Gone

Postby ARPoet » Wed Apr 22, 2009 1:44 am

Thanks for your comments.. I dont have much time for writing at the moment, due to various reason, but i do still have words in my heart waiting to be written.
Roger
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Re: Gone

Postby Katie » Thu Apr 30, 2009 5:10 pm

Ahh Roger, isn't it so wonderful to know that after we die we will spend eternity in Heaven with our blessed Father. None of us have to fear death, just the sadness we know we will cause the ones who love us to feel. And the only thing we have to pack are the things we did for Christ. This for an chronic overpacker is a true blessing. This is a wonderful write, reminding us all that it isn't going to be easy to leave this earth, there are so many things we will be leaving behind, but God waits just beyond the horizon, and what a wonderful blessing that is.

GOD BLESS YOU ROGER!!!

THIS IS WONDERFUL!!!!
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