And Then There Was You

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And Then There Was You

Postby norman on Sun Jul 22, 2007 7:51 pm

Just as I was giving up on love
yes it is so very true
And was I giving up on hope
And then there was you

Just as I was down and out
And feeling so darned blue
All I had to do was turn around
And then there was you

Just as my world was shrinking
And friends was so very few
Then I looked all around me
And then there was you

Just as I thought
Things was meant that way too
I just had to open my eyes
And then there was you

Just as nothing was going right
And I needed a friend like you
All I had to do was pray
And then there was you

I had prayed for an angel
But had given up on that too
Before I could even picture it
And then there was you

Just when all else failed
And I was feeling so blue
I just close my eyes
And then there was you

Just as God made the heavens
And the skies so perfect blue
I prayed for someone to love me
And then there was you

wrote 7/22/2007 BY Norman Hale JR.
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Postby Marlys on Sun Jul 22, 2007 7:54 pm

Somebody's in love! :P
BE TRUE TO YOURSELF!
Life is too short for drama & petty things, so kiss slowly, laugh insanely, Love truly and forgive quickly.
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Postby LadyMustang on Sun Jul 22, 2007 9:20 pm

Very beautiful and filled with love's passion bro so much enjoyed this one as alwasy your words are so heartfelt love it!!!!!

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Postby Janice Kennedy on Sun Jul 22, 2007 10:32 pm

What a beautiful e-card this would make Norman.
You have such a romantic heart, you write such beautiful love poetry.

Love and Blessings Jan :D :D
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Postby Ma. Theresa A. Coronado on Mon Jul 23, 2007 2:57 am

So sweeeet! It makes me fall in love again! :D
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Postby Lena on Mon Jul 23, 2007 7:07 am

If it could be like that for more people!
I love your poem and hope it will come true for me as well :wink:
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Postby norman on Mon Jul 23, 2007 11:45 am

WOW thanks everyone i'm glad you all like this one
i thought it might make an e-card as well but not sure what picture to put with it...lol
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Postby Shakela on Fri Jul 27, 2007 12:13 am

Dear Norman,

I turned everywhere looking for friendship and then there was you. God bless you and those you love.

Love always,
Shakela
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THEN THERE WAS YOU,

Postby karenkelley on Fri Jul 27, 2007 2:28 pm

GREAT WRITE NORMAN, LOVE TRANSENDS ALL EVIL, WHAT A GREAT WORD, LOVE !!!!! MEANS ALL THINGS TO ALL PEOPLE, THAT IS TRULY ROMANTIC, FROM THE HEART, I AM SURE SHE LOVED IT ALSO, SOON A BOOK? HAVE NOT FORGOTTEN, NORMAN, YOU WILL SUCCEED . HANG IN THERE AND KEEP WRITING THOSE LOVING POEMS!!! WE WILL KEEP READING THEM, BLESSINGS TO YOU AND YOURS, KAREN K.
thanks for the support. a great man is known by his works and word. may there be more people willing to uphold those truths.
respectfully, Karen Kelley
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Postby norman on Fri Jul 27, 2007 10:38 pm

thanks shakela i'm glad you enjoyed
and you too karen it's good to see ya back
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Postby hotshot09 on Sat Jul 28, 2007 6:03 pm

I really like this poem...
It's very well written:)
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Postby norman on Sat Jul 28, 2007 10:37 pm

thanks hotshot and welcome to the forums
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TO SOME WE SEEM LIKE A FOOL
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Postby DeaconSteve on Sat Jul 28, 2007 11:01 pm

NORMAN!! What a most beautiful, heart touching, and delightful poem this is, and yes, indeed would make for a most beautiful E-card. You have put your whole heart into this one my friend. WOW, what a fine write this is. But, then - that is all you write. love the poem and love my friend.

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Postby norman on Sat Jul 28, 2007 11:17 pm

thanks steve i'm glad you enjoyed this one take a look at my picture poem in friendship called "flowers in my hand" let me know what ya think
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Postby webmaster on Thu Aug 02, 2007 9:03 pm

Another good one Norman. It's an e-card:

http://www.nethugs.com/therewasyou.shtml

Thank you for sharing and thank you for all the nominations!
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