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by **JanetY** on Sat Oct 27, 2007 8:45 am

GROW OLD WITH ME

Grow old with me, my darling stay
Beside me as we walk our way
Through life’s uncertainties. Be my light
Through stormy days and dark of night.

You are my half, you make me whole,
You are the mirror of my soul.
Without you, life would make no sense.
Between us there is no pretense.

You know my thoughts before I speak.
You lend me strength when I am weak.
You tell me things I need to hear.
And, even then, you hold me dear.

Grow old with me, my darling stay.
I need you more and more each day.
Grow old with me, my heart implores.
We’ll live in love forevermore.

Copyright © 2007 Janet Yaeger

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by **Ma. Theresa A. Coronado** on Sat Oct 27, 2007 11:39 am

Every one dreams to grow old with her/his love... A well-penned, sweet poem. Thanks for the sharing, JanetY!

Love and prayers,
Theresa

by **JanetY** on Sun Oct 28, 2007 11:53 am

Thank you for reading and commenting, Theresa.

Janet

by **norman** on Sun Oct 28, 2007 11:43 pm

awesome writing here janety
very well heartfelt...i loved it
keep'em coming

by **JanetY** on Sun Oct 28, 2007 11:47 pm

Thank you very much, Norman.

Janet

by **Shakela** on Mon Oct 29, 2007 9:07 pm

Dear Janet,

This is a poem that I would want to relate to when I grow old. Your poem is simply wonderful. Thoughts for the old age. I'm going to put this on my "to do for the future" list. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem. God bless you and ll those you love.

by **karenkelley** on Mon Oct 29, 2007 9:22 pm

YOU ARE THE MIRROR . SOMEONE WHO SEES' AND KNOWS ALL ABOUT THE INNER YOU, STILL LOVES AND RESPECTS YOU. WHAT BEAUTIFUL THOUGHTS, WELL EXPRESSED. YOURS IS A WONDERFUL TALENT. THANKS FOR SHARING IT WITH ALL, HAVE A LOVELY EVENING. RESPECTFULLY, KAREN K.in FL.

by **Marlys** on Mon Oct 29, 2007 9:29 pm

Janet, one of the best poems ever in my opinion..right up there with the greats! Bravo..it's going into my faves! An ecard for sure!

by **Nancy** on Mon Oct 29, 2007 10:54 pm

Oh my friend this poem is so very beautiful and so touching. Yes everyone does dream of growing old with their mate as my boyfriend and I do. We talk about it all the time. Thank you for sharing such a great and well written poem.......Nancy

by **JanetY** on Mon Oct 29, 2007 11:19 pm

Gosh, thank you all so much for your very kind comments. I appreciate all of them--each and every one.

Hugs
Janet

by **Janice Kennedy** on Tue Oct 30, 2007 12:53 am

I agree with the others 100%. this would make a wonderful video. I hope Steve sees this one. A perfect one for a video.

Love and Blessings Joyful Jan

by **JanetY** on Tue Oct 30, 2007 4:09 am

Thank you Jan. I appreciate your sweet comment!!!

Hugs
Janet

by **Sir Daniel** on Tue Oct 30, 2007 6:28 am

you never cease to amaze me with how easy you make it look to write beautiful poetry, every line is elegant and your outlook on life truely has improved mine.

I am proud to call you my friend and fellow co-writer, there is magic in the air.

Daniel

by **JanetY** on Tue Oct 30, 2007 6:58 am

Ahhh, Daniel, I feel the same way. And, thank you again for introducing me to this site!

Janet

by **webmaster** on Mon Nov 12, 2007 7:55 pm

I love reading this one. The words were beautifully crafted in every way. Speaks from the heart. It's an e-card:

http://www.nethugs.com/growold.shtml

Thank you so much for sharing this one with us Janet. Your talent shines through the verses. Thank you Marlys for the nomination too. Great find!

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