Will you ever

[CuteSubmissiveGuy]

Hey everyone, Well I just joined this forum and I quess decided to start with an poem I wrote.

I hope you enjoy! and Thanks for letting me be a part of your community.



"Will you ever"

I don't think you will
ever fully understand
how you've touched my life
and made me who I am.

I don't think you could ever know
just how truly special you are
that even on the darkest nights
you are my brightest star.

I don't think you will ever fully comprehend
how you've made my dreams come true
or how you've opened my heart
to love and the wonders it can do.

You've allowed me to experience
something very hard to find
unconditional love that exists
in my body, soul, and mind.

I don't think you could ever feel
all the love I have to give
and I'm sure you'll never realize
you've been my will to live.

[webmaster]

Welcome to NetHugs SubmissiveGuy! Your poem makes a great e-card so I've made one out of it:

http://www.nethugs.com/willyouever.shtml

I hope you will like it. You are now a featured on our Hall of Fame here:

http://nethugs.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=7039

Again welcome and looking forward to seeing more of your wonderful work.

[LadyBlue]

Welcome to our site! Great work here. You certainly know how to make an entrance, lol.

Blessed be;
Rita

[CuteSubmissiveGuy]

Thank you so much Webmaster, I'm looking forward to being an active member of the community. wow! just joined and made hall of fame! I'm touched.

Again! thank you!

Here's one of my other poems.Hope everyone enjoys!

"My vow to you"

When you are sad, I will dry your tears
When you are scared, I will comfort your fears
When you need love, my heart I will share
When you are sick, for you I will care

You will feel my love when we are apart
Knowing that nothing will change my heart
When you are worried, I will give you hope
When you are confused, I will help you cope

When you are lost, and can’t see the light
My love will be a beacon, shining ever so bright
This is my vow, one that I pledge till the end
For you above all are my partner and best friend

These words I have written, speak of my love for you
From my lips these words spoken, shall always ring true
God has blessed me, and with your hand in mine
Both of our hearts, will forever intertwine

Into all lives, falls pain and sorrows,
I promise together, we will meet all tomorrows
Happy in Life , honor and love
blessed in unity by God above

[webmaster]

You're welcome! It's a great way to welcome new members especially when they write poetry that makes a sweet e-card. Thank you for sharing it with all of us here. You might want to start a new post for that other poem because it too can also be considered into a feature.

[CuteSubmissiveGuy]

Welcome to NetHugs. Your poem is splendid and I truly understand the feelings in it. The webmaster make a great decision. I will be watching for more of your work. This one is delightfully heartwarming.

Rita

Thank you for the kind words Rita.

Troy

[co]

Both poems are magnificent....prehaps you could re type "My Vow To You"and enter it again in the new topic section that way more people can read your brilliant work...
God Bless and keep up your wonderful talent...
coni

[LadyBlue]

You deserve all the accolades you get. Talent should be your middle name.

Rita

[Quiet Thunder]

Wow you are talented! I look forward ta reading more of your poetry!

[Shirley Shaw]

Hi, CuteSubmissiveGuy; Well you ae really off to a 'splendid start',indeed. An E-card,and (Both) poems, were exceptionally grand! 'Loved'em both' ! Congratulations,and it's nice to meet ya,new friend....Reminds me,of a not so distant past, of my own. 'I really 'Loved it'! Excellente'...'God Bless'...Love,Your (New),friend,shirley ann shaw.......(Hope to read, many more, like these).. Superb!...........

[CuteSubmissiveGuy]

Hi, CuteSubmissiveGuy; Well you ae really off to a 'splendid start',indeed. An E-card,and (Both) poems, were exceptionally grand! 'Loved'em both' ! Congratulations,and it's nice to meet ya,new friend....Reminds me,of a not so distant past, of my own. 'I really 'Loved it'! Excellente'...'God Bless'...Love,Your (New),friend,shirley ann shaw.......(Hope to read, many more, like these).. Superb!...........

Hi Shirley, Nice meeting you as well and thanks for the sweet words. I really appreciate that.

[Dana Brooks]

great poem...enjoyed it alot...