What I Would Do for You
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Jun/0923
Jun/0923
If it would help to send a rose,
to ease the pain you’re feeling..
I’d send so many roses,
to bring about the healing.
If I could think of a gentle word,
that would touch your troubled mind.
I’d send the word with a snow white dove,
God’s Peace then you would find…
A thousand poems I’d write for you,
If I really knew just how.
But if these poems touched your heart,
I’d make a start right now.
But as I could not understand,
just what pain you’re going through,
I’d just go off to a quiet place,
and I’d kneel in prayer for you.
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© Janice
(35 votes, average: 4.91 out of 5)
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6:35 pm on June 14th, 2009
I thank you for this wonderful card dear….even when I having computer trouble I’m always thinking about you….each card and poem is precious and special to me. I love you!
4:01 am on June 15th, 2009
a nice card
4:48 am on June 15th, 2009
This is lovely. It all about knowing what to do for someone special. Thanks for this poem.
7:40 am on June 15th, 2009
girish,
thank you very much.
7:44 am on June 16th, 2009
What a great poem. God Bless you
1:15 pm on November 18th, 2009
Thank-you so very much.I loved it as usual.
5:30 pm on January 17th, 2010
All the things above you can do for me,and it will make me happy.But I think so you don’t understand,what true love stands for.You always treated me like you treat you yourself mercylessly.We both are alike, the person who is close to our heart should go through those pains we have.But you are the only one who can do something for me.Grow old with me,as I want to be.Love till the last breath of your like, I wanted to doit for you.Be loyal till your soul is taken aways.Life is short might be tomorrow you have everything but not the person you love to be with you.Because you stoped and run away form that person,you love dearly.There will be only one thing left regret with untolorent pain.Do you want that kind of life then you are welcome to reject me.Go and keep giving and doing what your are doing runing away,pusing and stoping me when every I step forward towards you.What you want me to do Go on my knees and beg,you know what I will do it too.But just show me that you cares about me once.I will put my life on your feet.
5:32 pm on January 17th, 2010
Beautiful!!-I-would-love-the-roses.
6:58 pm on January 17th, 2010
it is such a heartfelt poem with so much feeling and love within! i love the pacing and the beat of it! love the words carefully choosed… and love the expressions are truely flow out from poet’s heart – and touch many reader’s souls!
7:16 pm on January 17th, 2010
soooooo nice and lovely..heart-warming…lucky person that poem or words are written for him/her!!!!!!!!!wonderful and even surprised that people still love people.Thanks to this web.nethugs..I mean.
7:52 pm on January 17th, 2010
I couldn’t send you a ROSE, but I’m always thinking of you everyday. Our LOVE inspires us in everything we do, and we are determined to achieve our dreams with much Love and prayers. May GOD guide you in your everyday life, free you from stress at work, and continue to strengthen our Love deep in our hhearts everyday. I Love You very much, hugs and kisses………MSS..AU
9:41 pm on January 17th, 2010
We must not run away from life and live life to the fullest.
1:28 am on January 18th, 2010
Loneliness: Are You sure or just assuming that someone is running away from You? .
You should not think the worst of this person and give up! Confront it if this person
Is the one You love. Just maybe the other person is assuming the same about You.
1:29 am on January 18th, 2010
Lonely Hill :Are You sure or just assuming that someone is running away from You? .
You should not think the worst of this person and give up! Confront it if this person
Is the one You love. Just maybe the other person is assuming the same about You?
2:00 am on January 18th, 2010
Brightness, I cannot,never ever think worst is big word even minor bad about that person.I AM 100% sure that person is running away,I called that person live my number so no way and no call back.I can I will confront that person if only once that person let me.I never ever can think bad about that person.
3:01 am on January 18th, 2010
It’s obvious that You both are very dear to each other. I’m sure that that person is not running away from You. Perhaps that person does not have the confidence like You do therefore feels abit intimidated by a figure like Yourself. I’m sure that You already know the phrase ‘Where there’s a WILL there is a way’.
4:20 am on January 18th, 2010
Dear, I thank you and it means everything to me your love, I’m always thinking about you and never do I ever want you to feel the way lonely hill feel, I love you too much dear, my nightly prayers, that you always be watch over by God’s angels and that the love of God that’s in my heart be always in your heart, I love you.
5:20 am on January 18th, 2010
Brightness,Thanks and yes I think so you are right.You are a wise person,understand excetly what I feel and mean.Roopach love is not name of loving words,hugs,kisses and for many peoples sex.Love is pure,can be silent just need the right soulmate to understand that silence even,scrifice for the betterment of your love.I get away from that persons life so that person fulfill its commitment.I was commited already,we did not cheat anyone but scrifice.I am proud on that person.I missed that person its been years to see that person.But love the soul and heart not outer looks as other.That person will be in my heart,till my last breath.I know I kept the heart of that person.
5:54 am on January 18th, 2010
Hey Lonely Hill
Yes, I agree that Love is Pure.
Keep Smiling
6:14 am on January 18th, 2010
please, with due respect. i want to ask if Barry and Roopach are married. cos the love they preach is too much. if they are not married they should try and do so.
11:13 am on January 18th, 2010
This is a very nice and love is the best thing we can have for the ones we care for and that love us, God Bless all.
11:28 am on January 19th, 2010
The poem really touched my heart, please ride on. Good job.
12:03 pm on January 19th, 2010
A divine love is the greatest gift and I thank God for our strong Love.