Cupid Tides
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May/0925
May/0925
On seashore, ringing tides tease;
sweet lovers’ rapture in the breeze,
what would the beauty of the beach be;
Without their aura, just a modest sea
the washed away seashells, glisten;
with God’s golden touch, cupid realm,
their foot imprints on wet sand’s face;
and enamored eyes in ecstasy embrace
abandoned alone, would the beach be;
without the passionate hearts to see,
the tides arise and jump in delight;
on the sight of kisses in twilight.
Written & Submitted By:
© sharmi
Music: ‘By The Sea’ © Bruce DeBoer
(22 votes, average: 4.68 out of 5)
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7:31 am on May 13th, 2009
Sharmi,
This is so beautiful and so deserving,Skip did a wonderful job!
God Bless You
Eva Dimel
8:38 am on May 13th, 2009
I knew this would make a fabulous card, I’m so happy Skip thought so too!!! Wonderful job on the poem Sharmi, wonderful job on the card Skip!!!
God Bless!!!
9:50 am on May 13th, 2009
thanx Eva and jpguest…for the lovely comments…its a lovely card..a big thanx to skip..I am overjoyed to see the card
10:07 am on May 13th, 2009
You’re so very welcome Sharmi, the poem & card are absolutely beautiful!!! Can’t wait to read more of your wonderful writes!!!
11:30 am on May 13th, 2009
You are right, dear friend…in everything and everyone without charm, aura and something else…you know better, nothing is possible…
11:52 am on May 13th, 2009
Sharmi,this is a beautiful verse & card.Like to see & hear more like this one.
1:10 pm on May 13th, 2009
so very beautiful.what would the beach be without the sweethearts to enjoy its beauty.thank God for all things beautiful that we have to enjoy.
WILMA PAYTORS.
1:24 pm on May 13th, 2009
This is a very nice romantic card dear…enamored eyes in ecstasy embrace watching the sunset and holding you in my arms…Love
2:18 pm on May 13th, 2009
This is just AWESOME !!!!
1:09 am on May 14th, 2009
yes, love; that would be “lovely”.
8:19 am on May 14th, 2009
Yup gud
3:33 am on May 15th, 2009
I’m thinking about you…while I’m studing
7:01 am on May 15th, 2009
yeah,its a lovely piece of art.i love it and i know you love it too.cheers
11:00 am on May 18th, 2009
great! i love it
1:13 pm on May 18th, 2009
Great pictures of the sky and the ocean. Whoever photograph the pictures took nice pictures! Greatly written, the tides arise and jump in delight;on the sight of kisses in twilight. I love that part.
4:23 pm on May 22nd, 2009
Sharmi, I am so sorry I am late in congratulating you on this wonderful work! God bless you always!
Love,
Denise
6:25 pm on May 22nd, 2009
A great treasure we have together forever we share our life foever as one…thank you for the nice message dear!
10:50 am on May 28th, 2009
ROMANTIC
6:12 am on June 1st, 2009
About the picture……The sunset reminds me how our God created all things beautiful in the sight of all men that even in the twilight we could see His greatness. As the sun rises and goes down at the end of the day, we must remember that there is a creator of all of these, to God be the glory.
7:08 am on June 12th, 2009
To my beautiful and wondeful wife…I thank God each day and I give you a embrace hug and I head out to work, and a kiss……have a bless day, I love you!
10:39 am on August 20th, 2009
dear all they talked about it thank you very much to the wonderful msg keep it up
2:32 pm on August 20th, 2009
Sharmi, you did a great job on this poem and it is magical. It makes me send my wife tons of kisses, because I love her very much and she means the world to me and she makes me happy!
2:39 pm on August 20th, 2009
thanx furever….well ..its my romantic heart’s dream… put into words.. glad u liked it… : )
4:56 am on August 21st, 2009
Thank you for touching my heart in this way. I am so honored to be loved by you.
–your honeyBee
5:18 am on August 21st, 2009
A kiss that last a life time I give you……………..!