Our Life Together

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Jun/09
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Come sit down so we can talk
or if we want, we’ll take a walk;
It doesn’t matter what we do
as long as I can be with you.

We can share our hearts and reminisce
of how we met, or our first kiss;
Then look back on the joy and laughter
and the hope that lies in ever after.

Or we can recall mistakes we’ve made
and realize the price we’ve paid;
Whatever happens, we know for sure
there is nothing our love cannot endure.

So if sometimes, we lose our way
God willing we’ll get another day;
To ask forgiveness and be forgiven
so we can continue this life we’re livin’

For we still have more dreams to dream
and things aren’t always as they seem
So lets’ hold hands and take a walk
beneath the stars tonight -
and know as long as we have each other
Everything’s gonna be alright.

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© Donna Deyne

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  1. Irene M.
    9:18 am on June 16th, 2009

    For you My LOVING DAD…

  2. Marites
    9:59 am on June 16th, 2009

    I love you Wes till eternity….

  3. rama
    10:47 am on June 16th, 2009

    for you the wonderful person who created me and to the love of my life and to the writter of the peom!!
    and all my friends and loved ones!!!
    thank you!!!!

  4. JULIET
    10:50 am on June 16th, 2009

    for we still have more dream to dream and things aren’t always as they seem
    so lets hold hands and take a walk beneath the stars tonight ,and know as long as we have each other everything gonna be alright. thanks and care.

  5. sols mate
    11:39 am on June 16th, 2009

    I believe you.

  6. Rainy
    12:29 pm on June 16th, 2009

    Very Lovely Poem!

  7. Ken
    1:05 pm on June 16th, 2009

    What an exciting, touching thought! Exciting what my heart is sensing and experiencing this very moment!

  8. Karin
    1:33 pm on June 16th, 2009

    So Sweet and beautiful! Its for me and my husbans

  9. murali
    1:43 pm on June 16th, 2009

    WAw love this poem, so touching , this poem made me feel so good. Hats oFf to the Author

  10. murali
    1:46 pm on June 16th, 2009

    Hi Donna Deyne,

    Thank u so much for sharing ur wonderful poems

    cheers

  11. Rosalie Jolley
    2:45 pm on June 16th, 2009

    What a beautiful poem.It says so much. Perfect for my husband.

  12. brenda
    2:50 pm on June 16th, 2009

    that is beauitful thank you jesus

  13. didi
    3:14 pm on June 16th, 2009

    love it and feel it so much..thank u

  14. Love
    6:17 pm on June 16th, 2009

    Thank you for this wonderful card dear…it makes each day special, and as long as we have each other, everything’s gonna be alright. Love

  15. Shirley Denise Griffiths
    7:29 pm on June 16th, 2009

    This poem is the truth about a love that is everlasting love between a man and a woman.

  16. tithel74
    7:57 pm on June 16th, 2009

    for my loving husband ed

  17. ken crook
    12:52 am on June 17th, 2009

    I feel so grateful that I found you and I can’t help but feel God is responsible for my doing so. Your music really moved me as well as the wording with each scene. I wish I’d found you sooner.
    thank you

  18. Taghreed
    2:28 am on June 17th, 2009

    Its Lovely, Sweet & Beautiful message from me to my Lovely Flower………..

  19. Lovely Flower
    3:07 am on June 17th, 2009

    To Taghreed….the words of this poem are meant just for YOU….

  20. Daniel G
    6:19 am on June 17th, 2009

    Our life together is a treasure. Take time each day to have quiet time together…a walk under the night stars holding hands…a joyous commitment forever we share…..!

  21. Onuorah Nneka Mary
    6:38 am on June 17th, 2009

    This is beautiful; togetherness is indeed a blessing. Thanks.

  22. Unique Me
    8:09 am on June 17th, 2009

    Lots of thanks should be showered to whoever created this,hope one day she will come back n will be together again..~!!

  23. Joe
    8:11 am on June 17th, 2009

    They say life is to live and love is give,this goes to my lovely Girlfriend,lets share our love with hopes to always fulfill what we both dream and want to,love u Cezzlez.

  24. Dick
    8:25 am on June 17th, 2009

    Hey; My thanks to the author for this heart rending peotry. I love all you have given to us all through God, our Forgiven. Thank you with my heart.

  25. jannietoh kinemba
    9:11 am on June 17th, 2009

    its s good and i have liked it keep it up

  26. MAAME
    9:32 am on June 17th, 2009

    The words are really deed.And i like it very much. Do keep bringing such poems out.

  27. Juliet
    11:05 am on June 17th, 2009

    Truly beautiful! “So lets hold hand and take a walk beneath the stars tonight and know that as long as we have each other, everything is gonna be alright!” God bless the writer of this peom. I love it!

  28. Tunde
    11:16 am on June 17th, 2009

    Candy, this is the perfect gift of the day. You can have it plus my heart. Luv ya

  29. Tereza
    12:48 pm on June 17th, 2009

    I love you Merle and this poem says the truth. We don’t need any more! Muah!

  30. Wendy
    1:24 pm on June 17th, 2009

    I want to take that walk with you under the stars, sit by the water, whatever, as long as we’re together..This could have been written for us…

  31. Dreamer
    2:10 pm on June 17th, 2009

    perfect poem sent to me by my partner

  32. joyfullesbian
    6:38 pm on June 17th, 2009

    My beautiful life-partner sent this card to me. She is the most amazing woman and I think God every day for sending her into my life.

  33. elsa
    7:22 pm on June 17th, 2009

    I wannna spend the rest of my life with u ron.m i knew its gonna be great to be together til we grow old.love you!

  34. jane
    7:53 pm on June 17th, 2009

    This truly reminds me of my darling husband who has gone home to be with the LORD. If you still have your loved one cherrish every moment you have, You never know when it will end.

  35. James
    7:25 am on June 18th, 2009

    Permanent friendship we tied together the knot…and what God put together nothing can separate you and me dear…I love you forever always!

  36. hazel
    9:09 am on June 18th, 2009

    just beautiful..

  37. Daniel
    7:17 pm on June 19th, 2009

    Spending quiet time together, is special and always there…

  38. Wendy
    9:16 pm on June 19th, 2009

    I lose my way and you are there to guide me back with your patience, understanding, and love..Mio amore per sempre.

  39. BEVERLY NAPIER
    7:23 pm on June 20th, 2009

    THIS POEM IS SO BEAUTIFUL. IT COMES STRAIGHT FROM THE HEART!!

  40. Yvonne
    11:36 am on June 23rd, 2009

    Beautiful baby! your so right ….i love you

  41. patrick
    7:24 pm on June 26th, 2009

    To my beloved…love you soooo much

  42. Deone
    3:58 pm on July 27th, 2009

    a place we can relaxe and be alone together and share our feelings and dreams dear…for your message I forever keep unto me only inside my heart those dreams we share. I wish i could hold you now, my wishful thinking one day I pray God will grant. I love you dear. God bless you!

  43. Teresa
    10:35 am on October 20th, 2009

    if i realy didn’t like YOU,i would leave YOU alone

  44. LAVERNE
    11:08 am on October 20th, 2009

    TO MY WONDERFUL HUBBY KELVIN SMITH ITS BEAUTIFUL WALKING HOLDING HANDS UNDER THE STARS OUR LIFE IS PERFECT LOVE YOU VERY MUCH LAVERNE G.

  45. My Sweetie Baby "BARRY GRUGGETT. " TN (rambo103a)
    12:27 pm on October 20th, 2009

    My Sweetie Baby ” BARRY” , Whenever I visit you, we always enjoy the laughter and the goodtimes we shared. The Strong Love deep in our hearts that we shared is Unique, because amid the distance that we endured, I made every effort to visit you every year. My Sincerest Love for you, give me more courage, and strong determinations to achieve my goals to see you every year. Times and seasons may change, but my LOVE for you will never ever change .I Love You Forever, my babyB, missing you more than ever, hugs and kisses……J..ROOpach..AUS

  46. jane
    1:21 pm on October 20th, 2009

    As I read this poem it reminds me of the many wonderful times spent with my darling husband and how each moment and memory are more important as the days without him pass.

  47. Barry
    2:17 pm on October 20th, 2009

    Dear, I thank you, for our lives we share together is what makes each day special. When we visite each other or chat and embrace each other tightly, it makes me very happy and Our Love takes us places. Each time you are on the plane I say a prayer for you and the long 24 hrs trip around the world you make to get to me, is “Strong Love” we have deeply in our hearts for each other. I love you dearly, and it does not matter what we do as long as I can embrace you in my arms and look into your eyes….Dear, I love you.

  48. Stevie
    4:56 am on October 21st, 2009

    Sally Ann Evans i love you so dearly and you are always in my thoughts sweetheart XXXXXXXXXXX

  49. Bill
    5:34 am on October 21st, 2009

    Our life together is what inspires me every day to do my best, to the best of my ability in everything. Thank you!

  50. barbara
    12:44 pm on November 1st, 2009

    To my Bobby This beautiful poem tells it all. Think about us as you read it.

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