One of God’s Finest Creations
You are my sunshine after the rain
My balm when I am in pain
My joy when I am in sorrow
My hope for a better tomorrow
You are my fluffy cloud up in the sky
My water when I am thirsty and dry
My blooming flower in the spring
When I need a lift you’re my butterfly wings
You are my moonlight when it grows dark
My most treasured piece of art
Everyday you are my inspiration
You are one of God’s finest creations
Written & Submitted By:
© Patricia Bankhead
October 11, 2013 @ 5:10 pm
This poem I truly appreciate, as it helps me through this day. I my husband hadn’t gone to eternity 31 years ago, today we would be celebrating our 72 years of marriage and I still hold him close to my heart and will always cherich him.
March 28, 2013 @ 10:56 am
Wonderful!
October 5, 2009 @ 11:56 pm
Praise God for this lovely poem which express the feelings in right words. Indeed, its a wonderful piece of art to say someone whom I really love and cherish in my life. Thanks…!!
October 3, 2009 @ 2:03 am
nice peom nice pic love it thanks for remembering me
October 1, 2009 @ 6:32 pm
THIS IS BEAUTIFUL
HUGSSSS
September 30, 2009 @ 2:29 pm
Nice poem, keep it up!
September 30, 2009 @ 2:08 pm
You are my sunshine my only sunshine. You make me happy! When skies are gray! You help me have a new perspective or a different perspective and then I will see the sunshine, again. And after the rain, I will see the beautiful rainbow. You are a white cloud, not a dark, gray cloud. You are a happy cloud. You bring me flowers no matter what the season. Your words encourage me. I want to encourage you too. I am not a glamour puss but God has given me a happy spirit that sometimes comes frothing out of my mouth and I am a shapely white cloud. I have a happy face inside and a smile on the outside.
September 29, 2009 @ 10:49 am
i love it nethug peoms always inspried me.
September 28, 2009 @ 6:18 pm
Wonderful poem, Reminds me of my precious husband. I sure do miss him, He was my perfect mate.
September 28, 2009 @ 3:15 pm
God Bless The Ones Who Have Such Gifts As To Making Such Beautiful Poems such as the ones we read such as this one! It Says It All, May All Who Read This Get As Much Joy As Myself! “MAY GOD BLESS ALL OF US IN THIS WORLD AND BEYOUND!
September 28, 2009 @ 2:39 pm
WHAT A BEAUTIFUL USE OF WORDS. THANK GOD THERE ARE PEOPLE THAT IS FORTUNATE TO BE ABLE TO LIFT PEOPLES SPIRITS UP.
September 28, 2009 @ 12:32 pm
A nice one. i love my dearie.u are ahead of the crowd.i love and cherish u. cant wait to be tied with you. u are a rare find.
September 28, 2009 @ 11:47 am
wonderful
September 28, 2009 @ 10:05 am
Wonderful poem thanx Love xoxo
September 28, 2009 @ 10:05 am
it’s alway’s a pleasure to me ,seeing men/women expressing their joy to our creator
September 28, 2009 @ 7:50 am
as it shows
September 28, 2009 @ 5:11 am
Very nice and beautiful…I treasure you my friend
September 28, 2009 @ 4:30 am
u are my treasure and i love u
September 28, 2009 @ 4:02 am
Så vacker dikt! Det känns som om ett hjärta som kommer nära mitt hjärta,och dessa hjärtan sjunger en lovsång till Jesus.
September 28, 2009 @ 3:35 am
friends like u are a rare find always… treasure you thro’ my entire life.. this is true
September 28, 2009 @ 1:46 am
thank you this very nice
August 7, 2009 @ 9:27 am
Thank you my SWEET & BEAUTIFUL Daughter! This is very beautiful & I love it! I LOVE YOU TOO!
July 27, 2009 @ 6:03 am
awww ty fred my man my life love u sweety xoxox
July 24, 2009 @ 12:35 am
thank you mary jane
June 20, 2009 @ 12:45 am
Thanks Babes!!!!!
June 15, 2009 @ 4:51 am
You are a good writer. I love your write-up. Keep it up. Thanks.
June 15, 2009 @ 4:11 am
yes…very beautiful poem
June 14, 2009 @ 11:22 am
You are my special friend I know
And it is a lot I have to owe,
But still it is something I wanted
To reach in your kind generousity
to have my music back
June 14, 2009 @ 10:19 am
Your poem is very beautiful. I congratulate you on your creativity.