add to this song
add to this song
you're the reason why i love
you're the reason why i live
i'm so happy you are here
to live, and breath and sleep
you're the reason why i live
i'm so happy you are here
to live, and breath and sleep
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you're the reason why i love
you're the reason why i live
i'm so happy you are here
to live, and breath and sleep
You make me come alive -
when tears fill my eyes,
You make me feel strong -
when I feel so alone.
you're the reason why i live
i'm so happy you are here
to live, and breath and sleep
You make me come alive -
when tears fill my eyes,
You make me feel strong -
when I feel so alone.
Live today as if it were your last, for tomorrow it will be your past, but live it with peace in mind, joy to find, and for God divine!
and now when i look
and i see your face
i'll know the perfect place cause
(now someone needs to write the chorus)
and i see your face
i'll know the perfect place cause
(now someone needs to write the chorus)
My new poetry site: www.poetrypoem/tiffanyprobus. If I don't update here I surely will on my site.
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Add To This Song
Well, I have looked at this over and over and it looks done to me. I think what Raquel wrote is a perfect chorus. Your last verse a.j. leads right back into the first verse so Raquey's is perfect for the chorus of what you and Steve wrote. I was going to look and possibly add something but I think you 3 did it perfectly.
Love.
Rita
Love.
Rita
well if ya'll want to participate we can write more songs...hint hint
My new poetry site: www.poetrypoem/tiffanyprobus. If I don't update here I surely will on my site.
Lyrics
I will be glad to try, Tiffany, but I have never written lyrics. Poetry is about the extent of the talent I was given, lol. I think it is a great idea, but let me tell you, that Steve, TuningintoGod (Raquel), and Eddy I know are great lyricists. You might call on the best to help you
. I bet Jeff and Caroline and Falling Leaf could help you too.
Love to you,
Rita

Love to you,
Rita
you're the reason why i love
you're the reason why i live
i'm so happy you are here
to live, and breath and sleep
You make me come alive -
when tears fill my eyes,
You make me feel strong -
when I feel so alone.
and now when i look
and i see your face
i'll know the perfect place cause
You're all that I've needed
From the very first start
You’re my reason;you’re my key
To this gentle precious heart
now when i think of it
and i feel confused
i will look back at you
i will always be amused
and now when i look
and i see your face
i'll know the perfect place cause
you're all that i've needed
from the very first start
you're my reason; you're my key
to this gentle precious heart
you're all that i've needed
you're all t hat i've needed
you're the reason why i live
i'm so happy you are here
to live, and breath and sleep
You make me come alive -
when tears fill my eyes,
You make me feel strong -
when I feel so alone.
and now when i look
and i see your face
i'll know the perfect place cause
You're all that I've needed
From the very first start
You’re my reason;you’re my key
To this gentle precious heart
now when i think of it
and i feel confused
i will look back at you
i will always be amused
and now when i look
and i see your face
i'll know the perfect place cause
you're all that i've needed
from the very first start
you're my reason; you're my key
to this gentle precious heart
you're all that i've needed
you're all t hat i've needed
My new poetry site: www.poetrypoem/tiffanyprobus. If I don't update here I surely will on my site.
what should this be called?
My new poetry site: www.poetrypoem/tiffanyprobus. If I don't update here I surely will on my site.
k thanks but u know songs are basically poems that u sing to
My new poetry site: www.poetrypoem/tiffanyprobus. If I don't update here I surely will on my site.
Song Title
How about "You're What I Need"
Yes, but I don't know a thing about verses and choruses and how they have to fit in with the rifts and all that jazz.
I am not saying I won't try. I am just warning you, I may be not be the one you need on lyrics, lololol.
Hugs,
Rita
Yes, but I don't know a thing about verses and choruses and how they have to fit in with the rifts and all that jazz.
I am not saying I won't try. I am just warning you, I may be not be the one you need on lyrics, lololol.
Hugs,
Rita
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