I close my eyes and pray tonight(new)

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I close my eyes and pray tonight(new)

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I close my eyes and pray tonight
giving myself up, hoping everything will be alright.

I will make sure to let God know I care
I want him for me to always be there.

I'll laugh and sing to praise him in every way
I wanna live my life more like God starting today.

I try to keep my faith even when things get tough
but I know God went through harder times,so I know this can't be enough.

I'll tell you something you all need to know
love God and love each other, then the real you will show.


There's just one thing to everyone I have to say
If you accept and trust God, everything will be okay.

Tiffany Probus
6/19/08
Last edited by a.j lover on Sat Jun 21, 2008 10:44 am, edited 2 times in total.
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I Close my Eyes and Pray Tonight

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Tiffany....this is soooooooooo good... I am recommending it for an inspirational/love ecard!

Good job!

Love ya!
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lol thanks. I try..I think sometimes too hard.
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I totally agree with Sheila, on this one, Tiffany. It is REALLY good, and I really like it,
it should be an e-card in my opinion.
Very good job, here, girl.


Love and Blessings Joyful Jan
:D :D :D
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Post by Ellen Hammond »

Dear Tiffany, :)

This is really nice. I agree with Sheila and Jan. It could be easily turned into an e-card. Good job indeed!! Keep your faith and keep on writing girl!! Blessings to all.
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Thank you.

I've gotten great advice from so many people here.
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Dear Tiffany, please don't stop writing. Keep them coming for us. I feel that this one is from the heart. I also hope for an ecard for you.
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Thanks. :D
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