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I thought I knew

Post by littlefeather500 » Thu Jun 22, 2006 11:52 am

I thought I knew what beauty was.
The soft perfection of a rose,
Petals of silk, kissed by the early dew.
The warmth of the morning sun,
The gentle shades of pink and blue.
A tender kiss to start the day.

I thought I Knew what happiness was.
The sound of a child’s laughter,
At a butterfly floating by.
A wish you make on a falling star.
As it shoots across the midnight sky.


I thought I knew what passion was.
The red and orange of the setting sun.
A fiery passion that lights the sky,
Just as the moon begins her gentle rise.
And cools the flames with silent serenity.

I thought I knew what love was.
Then I met you.

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Post by Jeff Guest » Thu Jun 22, 2006 12:13 pm

If there was ever a love poem that should be an ecard this is it!!! Wow I can't imagine how this made your hubby feel when he read it but It would bring this old fart to tears!!! Excellent is not a good enough word but I'm trying!!! God Bless You!!!

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Post by littlefeather500 » Thu Jun 22, 2006 12:20 pm

Thank you so much my friend. He has not seen it yet.
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Post by imfallingleaf » Fri Jun 23, 2006 7:22 pm

Well what on earth are you waiting for sis, show it to him!!!!! This is excellent! Any man or woman who is loved enough to have someone write something so beautiful and tender and touching has got to be the luckyest person on earth! Today's my anniversary and I didn't even get a card, got yelled at tho! :lol: I've never had anyone care about me like this! Never, gee it must be so wonderful! I'm so happy for you honey! I love you!

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Post by Miss Caroline » Sat Jun 24, 2006 4:29 pm

Wow, That is sooooooo beautiful Donna. I just love it. I hope, by now, you've shown this to your hubby. Does he cry easily? I bet he will over this, and I bet you get the best kiss you've ever had. :lol: :lol:
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Luv Ya

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Post by Shirley Shaw » Mon Jun 26, 2006 2:31 am

Hey,Donna;What more can I add than,WOW!. What a 'Super'-write'! "Love it'. This is truly, beautiful enough ,to be a 'Hallmark'! I mean it,you did a 'Fantastic' job,on this one! All of your poems,are good,but I really felt,this one...Love,Your Friend,Shirley shaw-raytown,mo.64133..........."God Bless You'.............. :D

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Post by LadyMustang » Mon Jun 26, 2006 10:15 am

WOW!!! Spirit Sis this one is truly MAGNIFICANT!!!! with each word you have written your love and passion for your husband comes out,He is a very lucky man to have such a loving woman by his side this one truly would make the most beautiful e-card. This is one of the best ones you have writtten even though all of your poetry is so beautiful and I enjoy reading everyone this one brought tears to my eyes and heart as I hope your husband has read it already and I know his heart felt every word and feeling from your own. I love this one have to put it in my favs of yours. You got my vote all the way for an e-card!!!!!! Love ya lots always!! God Bless!!!

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Post by littlefeather500 » Mon Jun 26, 2006 1:00 pm

I dont know what to thank you sound to simple for all of your comments. I did at last send a email to him. :D :D
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Post by Dana Brooks » Mon Jun 26, 2006 2:04 pm

wow....absolutely beautiful!!! what a wonderful poem!!!

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Post by LadyBlue » Mon Jun 26, 2006 3:22 pm

Brilliant work, pure emotion and total love is what I read here. This is so close to perfection. Yes, I agree, this should definitely be an e card. It is of Hallmark quality. You touched many hearts with this, Donna, and I hope by now you have shown it to your husband and he grasps the total love deeply etched in each and every word.

Blessings to you,
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Post by webmaster » Tue Jul 11, 2006 3:10 am

This one is sweet and makes a great e-card. It's a feature:

http://www.nethugs.com/ithought.shtml

Thank you for sharing LittleFeather! I hope you will like the card. Also thank you to Jeff for nominating this one.

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Post by LadyMustang » Tue Jul 11, 2006 3:21 am

CONGRADULATIONS !!!!!!! What a beautiful e-card spirit sis I knew it would make it I loved this one and had to read it again. CONGRADS SIS!!!! Love ya lots


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Post by Jeff Guest » Tue Jul 11, 2006 10:41 am

What a beautiful ecard Skip has blessed us with from your beautful poem my friend!!! I'm so happy for you and you so deserve it!!! God Bless!!!

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Post by littlefeather500 » Tue Jul 11, 2006 1:55 pm

Skip Thank you so much. It is beautiful. And to you Jeff for nominating it.
I sent the e card to my hubby. And the rest is history. Thanks again Skip for helping me express the love I have for him.
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