Without You
When you’re not here,
something’s not quite right.
It’s like the stars and moon,
without the night.
It’s something strange,
that I can’t explain.
It’s like Tarzan,
without Jane.
It’s like peanut butter,
without the jelly.
It’s like Santa Claus,
without his belly.
It’s like a joke,
that isn’t funny.
It’s like Easter,
without the Bunny.
It’s like Grandma’s gravy,
without the lumps.
It’s like a camel,
without any humps.
It’s like a present,
without a bow.
It’s like a planted seed,
that doesn’t grow.
It’s like a king,
without a crown.
It’s like a circus,
without a clown.
It’s like the birds,
without the bees.
Without you,
I’m just not me.
Written & Submitted By:
© Vicky (emerald)
Music © Margi Harrell
braveheart
June 4, 2010 @ 7:39 pm
So entirely true.
PAULA
December 23, 2009 @ 7:31 am
I agree with these words without God the world is nothing
cathy
November 1, 2009 @ 9:00 pm
its i love you babe,no name do i have to say,for babe you know who you are.this is a great card
cathy
November 1, 2009 @ 8:58 pm
i love babe,no name do i have to say.for babe you know who you are
Debra
September 21, 2009 @ 12:35 pm
I Love you Randy ,and I miss you evryday your away,this made my day Sweetie.Thank You so much
BetLou
September 2, 2009 @ 2:56 pm
Danny , my love this is for you only, is it wonderful or not, you are a wonderful husband sweetheart forever and always, my love” Your Angel Betty”
MC²
August 29, 2009 @ 10:45 am
I will die dear. Please come to me…loving you
LAVERNE
August 27, 2009 @ 12:28 pm
TO MY WONDERFUL HUSBAND HUSBAND KELVIN SMITH WHOM I LOVE SO MUCH OUR LOVE WAS MADE IN HEAVEN TOGETHER WE BE FOR EVER
Dorothy Newton
August 27, 2009 @ 10:07 am
My beloved Hobart died five months ago. He knew how much I loved him. I sent this to my friends and family with a dedication to my Sweetheart. Also thanking them for the support and love during this difficult journey I’m traveling. We had only been married five months.
chocolatehero3
August 27, 2009 @ 6:56 am
so apt the poem is prettymaid5. without u chocolatehero3 is nothing.
jenny
August 26, 2009 @ 7:56 am
so romantic
diana kagwiria
August 26, 2009 @ 7:40 am
A good poem with alot of creativity in it and a touching message.Bravo keep it up
sharmi
August 26, 2009 @ 7:40 am
sweet card….
Walter
August 26, 2009 @ 7:05 am
it’s a nice one for my lover, that’s my mum
lord abbot
August 26, 2009 @ 6:33 am
Ialways send these poems to my best friends and each one has always fitted in with the type of friend ihave, and this one especially goes to my wife whos far away.
Good work keep it up.
Your doing some of us great.Thanks.
chiluba
August 26, 2009 @ 4:00 am
my baby Kelvin indeed wiyhout you am nobody thanks for being there for me you mean the world to me.
love you so very much.
MELANIE
August 25, 2009 @ 9:36 pm
yes without YOU I am nothing…thank you very much oh LORD,my GOD.
MELANIE
August 25, 2009 @ 9:34 pm
yes without YOU I am nothing…thank you very my LORD,my GOD.
very nice , and meaningful in life
August 25, 2009 @ 7:39 pm
Is make me recall when i was still young , my age 16 to 30 years old, and now im 61 years old i am. when i got married and raised two kids , all girls i started got trail in life, because of my husband untill i run away from my husband with my two kids, Thank you Lord for all those trail i encountered, and now im alone with my two kids. with you out you Lord i am nothing in this world , pardon me, I LOVE YOU.
kkd
August 25, 2009 @ 6:01 pm
very beautifully written
shirley monroe
August 25, 2009 @ 2:58 pm
To the whole Board family, when they return to England.
Mr.MOE
August 25, 2009 @ 2:33 pm
Love the music and the poem really miss them
Maria
August 25, 2009 @ 2:27 pm
Withouth You I’m very lonely. My family have a life ther, I’m here. It’s a very hard life.
hr tetty partini
August 25, 2009 @ 2:07 pm
it’s wonderful poem……….
it’s wonderful poem.
Susila
August 25, 2009 @ 12:53 pm
I love the poem but do not know how to convey and convince my lady-love about my love for her, though this poem is being sent to her for what it is worth.
Ms.Valerie
August 25, 2009 @ 12:13 pm
to my family in Enderby: This poem means a lot to me and my community. Yes, this is how much i miss you all. May god bless and god speed be with you till i return home to be with family and kids and most of all my whole family. Untill i return, pray for me to have happy trails and i’ll be back soon.
All my relations
Valerie Vivian Paul
mahvash
August 25, 2009 @ 12:10 pm
yes.. without you i am just not me.
olufemi opeyemi
August 25, 2009 @ 11:59 am
I sincerely appreciate this work of art! It is wonderful; keep it up.
Karen Morrison
August 25, 2009 @ 11:29 am
I actually sent this to my bf as it meant so much to me…Thanks for all the beautiful words in this poem……..
Franklin
August 25, 2009 @ 10:58 am
This is a passionate poem