Cascading Softly
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Cascading softly, through layers of dreams,
You tumble so gently in time…
You’re essence is felt by my spirit, it seems,
As I sleep in deep slumber sublime.
Softly you whisper my name on the breeze,
Carried away on soft clouds…
I almost can touch you, illusive it seems,
Although nothing is spoken out loud.
Oh may I never awake from this moment,
To find an illusion instead….
Just let me slumber, alone in my dreams,
With echos of you in my head.
Written & Submitted By:
© Denise Ann
Music: ‘A Love Song’ © Yuko Ohigashi
(30 votes, average: 4.90 out of 5)
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9:38 pm on April 13th, 2009
Skip, you have done a beautiful page here..I love the new layout, and Jeff, I love you, as this was written for you.. Thank you, Skip..God bless one and all, what a delightful blessing!
Love always,
Denise Ann
9:41 pm on April 13th, 2009
This is the most beautiful love poem that I’ve ever read!!!
Such a talented & beautiful soul you are sweetheart!!!
I love you Denise Ann!!!
Always, jeff
1:39 am on April 14th, 2009
This is a gorgeous poem and most deserving of such a beautiful ecard. It was written by the sweetest heart of all. God bless you, Denise Ann, my Pokey Bee. I love you and God bless you and Jeff always,
Karen (Buttercup)
2:03 am on April 14th, 2009
Such a beautiful poem of love, by one
of Hugs love birds, for her turtle dove
of true love. Seriously, this could be any
more beautiful or ant sweeter, Denise.
Another wonderful job, Skipper.
Joyful Jan Jonguil
10:52 am on April 14th, 2009
Very nice indeed…and throughout full of deep feelings.
I like very much Skip…Is that you, my dear friend?
1:56 pm on April 14th, 2009
Such a lovely poem dear Butterfly. I can tell it was writen from your heart. I said a payer thanking God that you are writing your lovely poems once more.
Love you very much.
Glenna
5:00 pm on April 14th, 2009
MANY THANKS .AS USUAL YOU WRITE THE MOST BEAUTIFUL POEMS.
I FELT JESUS IN THIS POEM. THE SCENERY IS WONDERFUL . MAY GOD BLES YOUR BEAUTIFUL SPIRIT
6:21 pm on April 14th, 2009
Absolutely beautiful. As a poet myself, I admire your art in this poem of love. Bravo!!
7:03 pm on April 14th, 2009
Hotdiggitydog what a beauty this one is…WOW and WOW WOW!!! My
feeyantsay’ is named Denise Ann but some folks call her Pokey cause she pokes around and stuff and don’t get in no hurry!!!
Boy O Boy I sure do love this poem though!!!
7:30 pm on April 14th, 2009
I agree this is so elequently wrote I also write poems, and admire your thoughts , very well done!!
1:31 am on April 15th, 2009
For those of us who have lost our children, this poem has such meaning, and truth. Just try reading it with the loss of a child in mind. Love your poem, and the different meanings and soul renching beauty it holds.
1:46 am on April 15th, 2009
Really touching ,soothing, delightful.
5:35 am on April 15th, 2009
May God bless your beautiful hearts.
I love the good work you do.
Thank you and keep it up.
Ayub
5:08 pm on April 15th, 2009
Awe how nice. must always be wanted.
6:03 pm on April 15th, 2009
God bless you, one and all abundantly, as He has me and Jeff…
I love each of you always, like God intended, each one of you are wanted..be stil, and know He is God…
Forever,
Denise ann
6:55 pm on April 17th, 2009
I love you Denise Ann, Thank You for loving me and this beautiful poem!!! God is soooooooooooooo good!!!
9:46 pm on April 17th, 2009
I love you, Jeff Guest. Yes, baby..God is so good all the time..no matter what! Nothing, no one, will stand in the way of what God has planned.
forever,
Yours alone,
8:31 pm on April 18th, 2009
I Love You Denise!!!
6:19 pm on April 20th, 2009
I love you MORE!
2:49 pm on April 21st, 2009
This is the Poet that thuoch a heart .
Thank you
Denise
9:10 am on April 23rd, 2009
Charles, the pleasure was all mine. I’m so glad that this poem touched your heart. I wrote it to touch the heart of my wonderful soulmate, but am also so blessed that it has touched the hearts of others. May God ALWAYS bless you abundantly!
always,
Denise
2:35 pm on May 2nd, 2009
Hey Denise Ann for real thas goodwork kip it up
9:26 am on August 11th, 2009
WOW! SPEECHLESS
10:51 am on August 11th, 2009
This is wonderfully and carefully composed, i love every thing about it even the pix.
Denise Ann, God will continue to inspire u more, remain blessed.
1:35 pm on August 11th, 2009
A very wonderful card and not an illusion but true dear…God bless you and all your prayers be fulfilled.
1:38 pm on August 11th, 2009
This is for you, with love from Tina.
9:13 pm on August 11th, 2009
This poem is so beautiful and touching…Some people really can put feelings into words. Thank you Denise Ann, well done…Keep on writing…you are good.
7:39 am on August 12th, 2009
this poem tuched my heart ,, moved my feelings and bring tears to my eyes
2:51 am on August 14th, 2009
Such a beautiful poem….makes my heart ache with longing and tears flow for a love I have lost
4:33 pm on August 16th, 2009
Very Touching ! Thank You.
2:01 pm on August 25th, 2009
You are very wonderfuL, girl! You must have been swimming in the ocean of love ‘cos this is PENETRATING!!!
1:03 am on November 7th, 2009
My Sweetie Baby, ” BARRY”, You are softly cascading in my dreams, as I always cuddled your old uniform to sleep, I whisper your name and said ” I Love You” before i close my eyes to sleep. It wasn’t an illusion for me as the case maybe, but when we see each other every year, we poured our hearts out with so much LOVE we could ever feel deep in our soul. I Love you very much dear, more than you’ll ever, ever know. Hugs and Kisses…….J ..ROOpach…AUS.
1:25 pm on November 7th, 2009
Dear, forever may our dreams always be fullfilled. When we met it was so special and together our LOVE was so Strong and Powerful. Side by side breathing your air and walking together, and holding each other each day, makes like wonderful and much more than words can put it….embrace hugs and kisses